Phân tích "Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. What is your opinion and discuss advantages and disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. What is your opinion and discuss advantages and disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. What is your opinion and discuss advantages and disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR sẽ viết theo hướng advantages = disadvantages

• • • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Remote work allows employees to have more control over their schedules, leading to improved work-life balance. 
        • Supporting idea: They can better manage personal and professional commitments, potentially reducing stress and burnout.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Example:  Before the shift to remote work, my friend - Sarah, a marketing professional for a global company, spent hours commuting to the office, often feeling drained before her workday even began, struggling to balance her demanding workload with personal responsibilities.

• • • • Main idea 2: Both employees and employers can benefit from cost savings. 
        • Supporting idea: Workers save money on commuting, work attire, and meals, while employers can reduce expenses associated with maintaining physical office spaces.
        • Example: 
          • For example, IBM has saved billions of dollars by transitioning to a remote-first workforce. The company has been able to reduce its office space by 75% and save an estimated $2 billion per year on rent and utilities.
          • According to a study by Global Workplace Analytics, employees who work from home two days a week can save an average of $2,500 per year on commuting expenses.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Remote work can lead to communication challenges, as face-to-face interactions are limited. 
        • Supporting idea: This may impact teamwork, spontaneous idea sharing, and the development of a strong organizational culture.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
        • Example: Without the opportunity for informal interactions and spontaneous discussions, remote teams may find it difficult to build relationships and trust, which are critical for effective collaboration.
      • Main idea 2: Employers may find it challenging to monitor and ensure accountability for remote workers. 
        • Supporting idea: The lack of physical presence can make it harder to track work hours, measure productivity accurately, and address performance issues.
        • Example: In a traditional office setting, employers can easily monitor work hours by observing when employees arrive and leave the office. However, with remote work, employers may rely on self-reported work hours, which can be prone to inaccuracies. 

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