Phân tích "More and more companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "More and more companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

More and more companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Offshore manufacturing can result in job losses in the home country as production shifts to other locations with lower labor costs. 
      • Supporting idea: This can have negative social and economic impacts on affected communities.
      • Example: One real-life example of offshore manufacturing resulting in job losses in the home country is the electronics industry. Many electronic companies, such as Apple, Samsung, and Sony, have outsourced their manufacturing operations to countries with lower labor costs, such as China, Vietnam, and Mexico. This shift in production has led to job losses in countries like the United States and Japan, where these companies were originally headquartered.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Managing production in multiple locations can present challenges in terms of quality control, supply chain management, and logistics coordination. 
      • Supporting idea: Ensuring consistent product quality and timely delivery may become more complex.
      • Example: For example, companies like Toyota, Volkswagen, and General Motors have faced challenges in maintaining consistent quality control across their global production network. Issues such as product defects, supply chain disruptions, and logistical bottlenecks can arise when managing production in different countries, impacting the overall efficiency and effectiveness of the manufacturing process.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Offshore manufacturing can often be more cost-effective, as it allows companies to take advantage of lower labor and production costs in other countries. 
        • Supporting idea: This cost savings can lead to lower prices for consumers.
        • Example: Many electronics companies, such as Apple, Samsung, and Sony, have outsourced their manufacturing operations to countries like China, Taiwan, and Vietnam. These countries offer lower labor costs and favorable business environments, allowing companies to produce goods at a lower cost compared to manufacturing in their home countries.
      • Main idea 2: Companies can tap into the expertise and resources available in different countries, allowing them to benefit from specialized skills, technologies, and raw materials that may not be readily available domestically.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: Many car manufacturers, such as Toyota, Honda, and BMW, have established production facilities in countries like Japan, Germany, and the United States, respectively. These locations are known for their advanced automotive technologies, skilled workforce, and access to quality raw materials
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Offshore manufacturing can result in job losses in the home country as production shifts to other locations with lower labor costs. 
        • Supporting idea: This can have negative social and economic impacts on affected communities.
        • Example:  One real-life example of offshore manufacturing resulting in job losses in the home country is the electronics industry. Many electronic companies, such as Apple, Samsung, and Sony, have outsourced their manufacturing operations to countries with lower labor costs, such as China, Vietnam, and Mexico. This shift in production has led to job losses in countries like the United States and Japan, where these companies were originally headquartered.
      • Main idea 2: Managing production in multiple locations can present challenges in terms of quality control, supply chain management, and logistics coordination. 
        • Supporting idea: Ensuring consistent product quality and timely delivery may become more complex.
        • Example:  For example, companies like Toyota, Volkswagen, and General Motors have faced challenges in maintaining consistent quality control across their global production network. Issues such as product defects, supply chain disruptions, and logistical bottlenecks can arise when managing production in different countries, impacting the overall efficiency and effectiveness of the manufacturing process.

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