Phân tích "Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (KÈM SỬA BÀI HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Cohabitation might not carry the same level of commitment as marriage, leading to a lack of accountability and potential challenges in the relationship.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The absence of the formal vows and legally binding obligations inherent in marriage can give rise to a perception of reduced responsibility and dedication from both partners
        • There might be a tendency to treat cohabitation as a more provisional arrangement, and thus, conflicts might not be addressed with the same urgency and intention as in a marriage where the enduring commitment is explicitly defined.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • Example: Sweden has one of the highest rates of cohabitation in the world, with over 60% of couples living together before marriage. However, the rate of separation is also high, with over 40% of cohabiting couples breaking up within five years.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Cohabitation, due to its nature of close proximity and increased intimacy between partners, can sometimes elevate the risk of unplanned pregnancies
      • Supporting idea: In situations where a couple might not be adequately prepared for parenthood, this can potentially lead to the consideration of abortion as an option, subsequently putting the woman at a disadvantage both emotionally and potentially in terms of her physical and mental health.
      • Example: 
        • Sweden has one of the highest rates of cohabitation in the world, with over 60% of couples living together before marriage. It also has one of the highest rates of abortion, with over 15 abortions per 1,000 women.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

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