Phân tích "In some countries, children start school at the age of seven, so they could have more time to build a relationship with their parents. In other countries, some people think that children start school as young as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, children start school at the age of seven, so they could have more time to build a relationship with their parents. In other countries, some people think that children start school as young as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In some countries, children start school at the age of seven, so they could have more time to build a relationship with their parents. In other countries, some people think that children start school as young as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”children should begin their formal education at  a very early age”.
    • Main idea 1:  The younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to acquire new knowledge and information >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education
      • Example: 
        • Scientific research has illustrated that language acquisition ability is greater at a younger age than at an older one; therefore, an increasing figure for parents would like their children to be exposed to foreign languages sooner >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Attending schools earlier offers children opportunities to discover their talents or interests. 
      • Supporting idea: This means that they can build a stronger foundation in subjects they are good at or interested at an early age instead of waiting until age seven >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn DIỄN ĐẠT "GIỎI LÀM VIỆC GÌ" (good at sth) TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: A child who is interested in science may be enrolled in a STEM-focused preschool or kindergarten.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm ”they should begin at at least 7 years old” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1:  It might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "CHILDHOOD" IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: Because allowing children to cultivate their skills and interests through normal activities at home can promote creativity, self-discovery, and a sense of autonomy, which are essential for their overall development and lifelong learning.

      • Example: A child who is interested in cooking can help their parents in the kitchen, learn how to follow recipes, and experiment with different flavors.
    • Main idea 2: Commencing school at a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at home >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "kid" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Word form của "integrate"
      • Example: In Finland, the legal school starting age is 7 years old. However, many parents choose to keep their children home for an additional year or two. This is because they believe that it is important for children to have more time to learn and grow at home, with their parents.

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