Phân tích "Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until there are six or seven years old. Others believe that is important for young children to go school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until there are six or seven years old. Others believe that is important for young children to go school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until there are six or seven years old. Others believe that is important for young children to go school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé, có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lợi ích số 1 of attending school from a young age 
    • Main idea 1:  The younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to acquire new knowledge and information >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education
      • Example: 
        • Scientific research has illustrated that language acquisition ability is greater at a younger age than at an older one; therefore, an increasing figure for parents would like their children to be exposed to foreign languages sooner >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lợi ích số 2 of attending school from a young age 
    • Main idea 2: Attending schools earlier offers children opportunities to discover their talents or interests. 
      • Supporting idea: This means that they can build a stronger foundation in subjects they are good at or interested at an early age instead of waiting until age seven >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn DIỄN ĐẠT "GIỎI LÀM VIỆC GÌ" (good at sth) TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: A child who is interested in science may be enrolled in a STEM-focused preschool or kindergarten.

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