Phân tích "Children are facing educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích ''Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: As far as the academic burden is concerned, it is the escalating competitiveness of the job market accompanied by the parental over-expectation that is to blame.
      • Supporting idea: The organisations’ demand for a qualified workforce pours into the parents’ mind a thought that their children have to be successful at school, and many youths today take studying as an obligation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "youth" tiếng anh
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    • Main idea 2: The appearance on the media at such a young age may deprive the junior citizens of an innocent and carefree childhood. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "appearance"
      • Supporting idea: Regarding the commercial pressure children have to encounter, fast food chains or sweetshops have made them the target customers, and they are dragged into a chaotic influx of information by both the online and offline advertising campaigns.
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: parents should create a mentally and physically healthy domestic environment, involving a balance between learning and relaxing. 
      • Supporting idea: Cooling-down activities such as sports, drawing or travelling, which are normally affordable, can release the stress of children brought on by both academic and social burdens.
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    • Main idea 2: governments can establish stringent regulations.  
      • Supporting idea: Similar restrictions about screen time in schools and laws governing advertising would also help alleviate the novel burdens technology has added to children’s lives.
      • Example: A good example of this would be a law recently passed in mainland China that prohibits gaming companies from allowing children to play more than 3 hours online per week.

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