Phân tích "You live in a small town and last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn’t even switch on" IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 1

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Bên cạnh SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "You live in a small town and last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn’t even switch on" IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 1.

I. Đề bài

You live in a small town and last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn’t even switch on.

Write a letter to the store manager.

In your letter:

  • tell the store manager where you live and what happened
  • explain the problem with the laptop
  • state what action you would like the manager to take

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng letter này thì đã quen thuộc với học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE 1 KÈM 1 GENERAL TRAINING của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé, có thể bố cục bài như sau: 
  • Trả lời câu hỏi số 1: tell the store manager where you live and what happened >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt Occur, Happen & Take place
    • I am writing to report an issue with the laptop which I bought from your store. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "issue" tiếng anh
    • I live in…… I purchased a laptop from your shop one week ago, and it was working perfectly till yesterday night.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: I am a loyal customer to your brand and my resident is in …., and I drove about two hours to get to your store) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase "customers" tiếng anh 
  • Trả lời câu hỏi số 2: explain the problem with the laptop
    • This morning, when I tried to switch on the laptop, I found that it was not working as expected
    • When I press the power button, I can hear a beep sound and the lights also get on. However, I can’t see anything on the monitor/screen. I tried many times and it didn’t help. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "however" tiếng anh 
  • Trả lời câu hỏi số 3: state what action you would like the manager to take
    • I request you to send a technician to resolve this problem / to sort this out >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "sort" tiếng anh
    • It will be great, if you repair my laptop as early / quickly as possible because I need to submit an assignment, which is saved on the laptop hard disk. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: I just want you to schedule a time for me so that I could either visit your store to pick up a brand new laptop of my choice from your store as a replacement, or you will make a full refund to me) >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: pick up

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