Phân tích "Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.
    • Main idea: Sports facilities provide suitable spaces and equipment for people to exercise. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The increasing popularity of gym classes or sports clubs gives people more chances to improve their health.
      • Example: For example by installing exercise equipment in parks as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Increasing the provision of sports amenities would have little impact on public health.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Most health problems do not stem from a lack of opportunities, but from a lack of motivation.
        • Many people who paid for an annual gym membership failed to go entirely after just one month. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "after" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: It is more important to educate citizens about basic health awareness. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A public awareness campaign about the dangers a sedentary lifestyle can have on one’s fitness would affect not only people’s well-being but also their understanding of the issue.
        • Public campaigns and health protection programmes should be promoted so that people know how to protect their health effectively. .> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "promote"
        • A person would easily avoid some potential health problems if he is equipped with sufficient basic knowledge about medicine and health care. 
      • Example: For example, when a child knows more about the adverse effects of smoking, he might be less likely to take up this bad habit in his adulthood. 

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