Phân tích "Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Lack of privacy is one of the biggest handicaps of being a celebrity
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They are being judged constantly on their personality, habit and a lot more. 
        • Reading rude, insulting, derogatory, nasty lies about one’s own self is a part and parcel of a famous film star’s daily routine. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng Topic Daily routine IELTS 
        • This leads to the destruction of their private lives.  
      • Example: For example, ‘A-listers’ like Kanye West are hounded by Papparazzi wherever they go and can never lead a ‘normal’ life again.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: A famous person cannot do things that an ordinary person can easily.
      • Supporting idea: Even they cannot go for shopping to the super market, take a walk, chilling with friends at the park or having dinner with family at the local restaurant.
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: celebrities are fabulously wealthy
        • Supporting idea: 
          • From signing multi-million dollar deals and appearing in events and concerts to walking the red carpet while the world drools over what you wear is part of the grandiose lifestyle of a superstar.
          • They often become millionaires overnight, and this allows them to buy whatever they want for themselves and their loved ones and all for doing something they love. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They can afford luxurious homes and cars, fancy gifts and gorgeous cloths, some feel fortunate enough to share their wealth with the less fortunate)
        • Example: Premiership footballers are a prime example; with most of them being able to support themselves for the rest of their lives, after earning over $50,000 per week, on average, for many years. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "average" tiếng anh 
      • Main idea 2: Celebrities also exert considerable influence on the society.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Their followers listen to them and imitate them blindly. 
          • Celebrities can make a positive difference to the world by lending their support to various causes. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "various" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Lack of privacy is one of the biggest handicaps of being a celebrity
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They are being judged constantly on their personality, habit and a lot more. 
          • Reading rude, insulting, derogatory, nasty lies about one’s own self is a part and parcel of a famous film star’s daily routine. 
          • This leads to the destruction of their private lives.  
        • Example: For example, ‘A-listers’ like Kanye West are hounded by Papparazzi wherever they go and can never lead a ‘normal’ life again. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "wherever" 
      • Main idea 2: A famous person cannot do things that an ordinary person can easily.
        • Supporting idea: Even they cannot go for shopping to the super market, take a walk, chilling with friends at the park or having dinner with family at the local restaurant.
        • Example: 

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