Phân tích"An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion" (kèm bài sửa)

Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cung cấp Phân tích essay về "An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?"

An increasing number of people are using internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer while others believe people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think this has brought people closer
    • Main idea 1: Through social media sites, now people can have friends from different countries that are living in different circumstances >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "circumstance"
      • Supporting idea:
        • It helps them to learn about other cultures and practice foreign languages. 
        • People having similar interests can share their view points and learn from each other. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: The internet has become a platform for young generation to know about things happening in their country, share their ideas and work together to resolve any issues >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "issue" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others believe people are becoming more isolated & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: netizens are likely to withdraw themselves from physical dealings with each other and thus get socially isolated >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: With the burgeoning popularity of the internet, people spend hours in the virtual world
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: people are relying entirely on communication technology even to share greetings with their near ones who are living next to them >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ Vựng IELTS Topic TECHNOLOGY
      • Supporting idea:
        • regular community meetings almost never occur these days as most interactions are happening via video conferencing. 
        • This leads to more fake relationships which are fragile in nature and short-lived >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "short-lived" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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