Phân tích "Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 29/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Sửa chi tiết 2 lần Câu hỏi Part 1 IELTS SPEAKING: ​Do you work or are you a student?, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 29/8/2023)

• Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Most of the children mimic their parents’ activities and thus parents have a greater role in setting good examples for their kids. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The reason behind most children imitating their parents' actions lies in the influential role parents play in shaping their children's behaviors, emphasizing the significant responsibility parents have in providing positive models for their offspring to emulate.

      • Example: For example, parents who regularly argue with others may find that their child both imitate them and consider this bad practice as an ideal life tactic to solve >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "practice" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Parents are more close to children and they can teach their kids the important aspects of being a good member of the society. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "factor/aspect" (Diễn đạt "tiêu chí" tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea: Parents' proximity to their children fosters a unique bond through which they can impart crucial lessons about becoming valuable contributors to society, leveraging their close relationship to instill essential values and behaviors.

      • Example: For instance, parents may teach their children and guide them to assist poor people by providing the food prepared by their parents. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh

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