Phân tích "Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Main idea 1: Most of the people now have equal opportunity to explore the world all because of cheap flights>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
    • Supporting idea: Traveling by air used to be a luxurious method of travel; however, low cost airlines such as Air Asia and Vietjet Air have given the opportunity for ordinary people to travel abroad with inexpensive flight to gain more knowledge
    • Example: 
      • For example, AirAsia is a low-cost airline that was founded in Malaysia in 1993.** It is now one of the largest low-cost airlines in Asia, and it offers flights to over 160 destinations in Asia and Australia.
      • Vietjet Air is a low-cost airline that was founded in Vietnam in 2011. It is now one of the largest low-cost airlines in Vietnam, and it offers flights to over 60 destinations in Vietnam and Asia.
  • Main idea 2: Cheap air flight enables intercultural exchanges between countries. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • The advent of cheap air fare makes it possible for people the world over to travel regularly, regardless of the purpose of the trip.
      • People have the opportunities to learn from different cultures and have a better understanding of countries they used to be unfamiliar with. 
      • This, in turn, enhances cultural communications between countries.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫnParaphrase từ "increase/rocket"
    • Example: 
      • For example, a person from the United States who travels to India may learn about Indian culture, such as the importance of family and the caste system. They may also learn about Indian cuisine, such as curry and tandoori chicken. This new knowledge can help the person to better understand India and its people.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Similarly, a person from China who moves to the United States may learn about American culture, such as the importance of freedom and democracy. They may also learn about American sports, such as baseball and football. This new knowledge can help the person to better understand the United States and its people.

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