Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cung cấp Phân tích đề"Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng discuss both views and give your opinion phân tích bố cục như sau:
- Body 1: viết về quan điểm số 2 "it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have"
- Main idea: advertising làm mọi người đua đòi theo trend (advertisers focus on selling a brand image and persuade buyers to believe that higher social status is attached to certain brands by using the image of glamorous and successful people. Therefore, we are manipulated to follow the latest trend to achieve higher status, ending up with irrational buying decisions)>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "attach" tiếng anh
- Body 2: viết về quan điểm số 1 (ủng hộ quan điểm này) "advertising has positive economic effects"
- Main idea 1: advertising giúp kích thích bán được hàng, tạo lợi nhuận cho công ty, từ đó phát triển kinh tế nói chung (companies need to tell customers about their products while advertising is the most effective tool to spread that information to the public)
- Main idea 2: advertising industry tạo ra công ăn việc làm, từ đó tạo ra lợi ích kinh tế (advertising is a creative industry that employs many people)>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
- Body 1: viết về quan điểm số 2 "it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have"
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Advertising has sparked debates regarding its effects, with some asserting its positive economic contributions, while others believe it fosters social dissatisfaction. I agree with the former point.
On the one hand, critics argue that advertising negatively impacts society by instilling dissatisfaction among individuals. Advertisers often emphasize a brand's image, associating products with high social status by showcasing glamorous and successful individuals. This creates a false perception that owning specific items equates to achieving a superior lifestyle or elevated social standing. Consequently, consumers are manipulated into pursuing trends, leading to irrational purchasing decisions. Over time, this perpetual cycle of consumption fosters feelings of inadequacy as people compare themselves to unattainable standards, undermining their self-esteem and financial stability.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, supporters, myself included, highlight advertising's significant economic benefits. Firstly, advertising plays a vital role in promoting sales, which, in turn, generates profits for companies. By effectively spreading information about products and services to a broad audience, businesses can attract more customers and boost their revenues. This economic activity not only sustains individual companies but also contributes to overall economic growth. Secondly, the advertising industry itself creates numerous employment opportunities. From copywriters and graphic designers to marketing specialists and media planners, advertising sustains a wide array of professions. This job creation bolsters household incomes, stimulates consumption, and ultimately benefits the economy.
In my opinion, while advertising may cause some social drawbacks, its economic advantages outweigh its disadvantages. The dissatisfaction it fosters can be mitigated through consumer education, while its contributions to economic development and employment are undeniable.
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