Phân tích "Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be or to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be or to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be or to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: advertising has been shaping consumers' behaviours with several identical patterns and preventing us from making us a diversified society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A common practice is that marketers try to create new habits for customers who nonstop adopt new lifestyles' concepts, and then these habits then become the norms of modern life.
        • If we look around, we can see that people all over the world now wear the same kind of clothes, they follow the same fashion, eat the same kind of foods and watch or listen to the same kind of music. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "follow" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
        • When people feel tired, they now get familiar with taking an energy drink like Redbull or Sting instead of water, which never happened in the past. 
        • Modern citizens around the world, at present, love to wear clothes of Gucci, use an iPhone 6, take a Starbucks in the morning and go to McDonald's for lunch.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Because people usually take some superstars as their role models, letting them see ads involving these famous people would give rise to the desire to by the same products or to react in the same ways. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Diễn đạt "người nổi tiếng" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: if they do not use those products, they might feel that they are just old-fashioned ones >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "product" tiếng anh
    • Example:  

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