Phân tích "Advertisement is now widespread in all communities. Almost everyone had access to this medium on a daily basis. However, the effects are not always positive. What are some of the negative effects of advertisement? What can be done to minimize these bad effects?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Advertisement is now widespread in all communities. Almost everyone had access to this medium on a daily basis. However, the effects are not always positive. What are some of the negative effects of advertisement? What can be done to minimize these bad effects?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Advertisement is now widespread in all communities. Almost everyone had access to this medium on a daily basis. However, the effects are not always positive. What are some of the negative effects of advertisement? What can be done to minimize these bad effects?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: This affects what people think is important (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the ubiquity of advertisement is distorting people’s perception on what is important in life)
      • Supporting idea: It makes younger generations become more superficial and only care about owning whatever’s considered popular. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "generation" 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Advertising has a negative impact on people’s lives
      • Supporting idea: 
        • With the omnipresent advertisement, it could potentially cause people to do impulsive shopping (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: sometimes we buy what tempts us without the insight of what we need actually) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "tempt"
        • People are encouraged by these ads to buy and own more stuff than needed. 
        • One consequence of this indulgence in buying new things is that people are buying more, they are also throwing out more stuff than ever, causing a burden on the environment. 
      • Example: For example, media is flooded with commercials of beauty products, which lures us into buying them, and people, especially women, are crazy about these things and buy them even without consulting their dermatologists. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Taxes on advertising
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There could be a sliding scale of taxation – higher prices for those who want to advertise unhealthy or environmentally destructive consumption (cars, fast food) and lower rates for socially beneficial subjects (charities, government services, awareness raising campaigns).
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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