Phân tích "According to a recent study, the more time people used the internet the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seing the internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "According to a recent study, the more time people used the internet the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seing the internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

According to a recent study, the more time people used the internet the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seing the internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: One potential negative impact of excessive internet use is social isolation. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • If people spend too much time online, they may have less time and motivation to engage in face-to-face social interactions with others. 
        • This can lead to feelings of loneliness and disconnection from others.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Another potential negative impact is the quality of social interaction.  
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The internet is not a substitute for in-person interaction.
        • The lack of nonverbal cues and physical presence can limit the depth and richness of communication, and may make it more difficult to establish and maintain meaningful relationships. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"establish"tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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