Phân tích "A report shows many children, from the ages of 7-11, spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should take to solve it?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "A report shows many children, from the ages of 7-11, spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should take to solve it?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

A report shows many children, from the ages of 7-11, spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should take to solve it?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: Excessive television watching and video game playing among children aged 7-11 can have several negative effects on the children, their families, and society as a whole
    • Main idea 1: Excessive screen time can lead to a sedentary lifestyle, contributing to health issues such as obesity and related conditions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Prolonged periods of sitting while watching television or playing video games can result in a significant reduction in physical activity. 
        • This lack of movement can lead to an imbalance between calorie intake and expenditure, ultimately contributing to obesity.
      • Example: A 2019 study published in the journal Pediatrics found that children who spent more than two hours per day watching TV or playing video games were more likely to be overweight or obese than children who spent less than two hours per day on these activities. 
    • Main idea 2: Spending too much time in front of screens can reduce face-to-face social interactions, potentially hindering the development of important social skills.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Interacting with screens rather than people can limit a child's ability to empathize with others. 
        • Empathy is a critical social skill that involves understanding and sharing the feelings of others, which is best learned through direct interpersonal interactions.
      • Example: A 2020 study published in the journal Nature Human Behaviour found that children who spent more than two hours per day watching TV or playing video games were more likely to have difficulty understanding and responding to the emotions of others. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Parents should monitor and limit their children's screen time, ensuring that it aligns with age-appropriate guidelines.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Set clear and consistent rules regarding when and how much screen time is allowed on a daily or weekly basis.
        • Create a family media plan that outlines screen time limits and guidelines for different devices and activities.
    • Main idea 2: Promote a balance between screen time and physical activities, hobbies, and outdoor play.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Dedicate time each day for outdoor play and physical activities. Encourage your child to explore nature, play sports, or engage in active games with friends or family members.
        • Enroll your child in sports, dance, art classes, or other extracurricular activities they are interested in. These activities not only promote physical fitness but also provide opportunities for skill development and social interaction.

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