🔥 Phân tích"A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​ (Thi ngày 17/3/2025)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20.

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  • Overall:
    • It is clear that there were upward trends in the percentage of both male and female drivers with driving license over the given time.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: although males constantly constituted the higher percentages than females did, the latter group experienced the more remarkable change)
    • The gap between 2 groups was small over the period.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "gap" tiếng anh
    • In stark contrast, concerning proportion of young drivers aged 17-20, the graph shows opposing trend, with numbers decreasing over the period 1996-2006. 
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • The ratio of male driving license holders was stable at 70% from 1976-1981, then increasing relatively gradually to 78% in 1996, before growing slightly and steadily, approaching the peak at 80% in 2006.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "stable" tiếng anh 
    • The rise for female counterparts was from 30% to the highest point at 60% over the same period. 
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • Regarding the percentage of drivers aged 17-20, both male and female group underwent downward trend, from 50%-45% for the former and from 30%-20% for the latter.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "trend" tiếng anh
    • The change in male group was less considerable than that in female counterpart.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar charts illustrate the proportion (tỷ lệ - the fraction or percentage of a whole) of men and women in Great Britain who held a driving license (giấy phép lái xe - an official document allowing a person to drive) and those who applied for one at the age of 17-20.

Overall, there was a notable (đáng chú ý - significant and worthy of attention) upward trend in the percentage of licensed drivers, with men consistently outnumbering women. However, the proportion of young applicants exhibited an inverse trajectory (quỹ đạo ngược lại - a contrasting trend or direction), as their numbers declined over the period.

In terms of licensed drivers, the percentage of men remained relatively stable (tương đối ổn định - mostly unchanged with minor fluctuations) at 70% from 1976 to 1981, then climbed steadily (tăng đều - increased gradually and consistently) to reach 80% in 2006. By contrast, the proportion of women escalated sharply (tăng vọt - rose quickly and significantly) from 30% to 60% over the same period, narrowing the gender gap (thu hẹp khoảng cách giới tính - reducing the disparity between men and women).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Conversely, the percentage of 17-20-year-old applicants exhibited a persistent decline (sự suy giảm liên tục - a continuous drop over time). The male category fell from 50% to 45%, whereas the female group experienced a more pronounced decrease (sự sụt giảm đáng kể hơn - a sharper reduction in numbers), plunging from 30% to 20%. This downward shift (xu hướng giảm - a movement towards lower values) suggests a waning interest (sự giảm sút hứng thú - declining enthusiasm or participation) in obtaining a driving license among the younger generation.

New Vocabulary & Definitions:

• Proportion (tỷ lệ - the fraction or percentage of a whole)

• Driving license (giấy phép lái xe - an official document allowing a person to drive)

• Notable (đáng chú ý - significant and worthy of attention)

• Inverse trajectory (quỹ đạo ngược lại - a contrasting trend or direction)

• Relatively stable (tương đối ổn định - mostly unchanged with minor fluctuations)

• Climbed steadily (tăng đều - increased gradually and consistently)

• Escalated sharply (tăng vọt - rose quickly and significantly)

• Narrowing the gender gap (thu hẹp khoảng cách giới tính - reducing the disparity between men and women)

• Persistent decline (sự suy giảm liên tục - a continuous drop over time)

• More pronounced decrease (sự sụt giảm đáng kể hơn - a sharper reduction in numbers)

• Downward shift (xu hướng giảm - a movement towards lower values)

• Waning interest (sự giảm sút hứng thú - declining enthusiasm or participation)

Synonyms & Antonyms:

Proportion: fraction, percentage, share | whole, entirety, sum
Climbed steadily: rose gradually, increased consistently, grew progressively | declined, dropped, fell
Persistent decline: continuous drop, steady decrease, prolonged reduction | increase, rise, surge

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• "By contrast, the proportion of women escalated sharply from 30% to 60% over the same period."

• "This downward shift suggests a waning interest in obtaining a driving license among the younger generation."

Difficult Grammar Structures:

1. Participle Clauses: IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"By contrast, the proportion of women escalated sharply, narrowing the gender gap."

   • (Cấu trúc rút gọn phân từ - hành động xảy ra đồng thời)

   • (Dịch: Ngược lại, tỷ lệ phụ nữ tăng vọt, thu hẹp khoảng cách giới tính.)

2. Relative Clauses: IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"The bar charts illustrate the proportion of men and women who held a driving license and those who applied for one at the age of 17-20."

   • (Mệnh đề quan hệ - dùng để cung cấp thêm thông tin về chủ ngữ)

   • (Dịch: Các biểu đồ thanh minh họa tỷ lệ nam và nữ có bằng lái xe và những người đăng ký khi ở độ tuổi 17-20.)

3. Comparative Structures: IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"The male category fell from 50% to 45%, whereas the female group experienced a more pronounced decrease."

   • (So sánh hơn - chỉ sự khác biệt giữa hai nhóm)

   • (Dịch: Nhóm nam giảm từ 50% xuống 45%, trong khi nhóm nữ trải qua sự sụt giảm đáng kể hơn.

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