Phân tích"A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20.

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  • Overall:
    • It is clear that there were upward trends in the percentage of both male and female drivers with driving license over the given time.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: although males constantly constituted the higher percentages than females did, the latter group experienced the more remarkable change)
    • The gap between 2 groups was small over the period.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "gap" tiếng anh
    • In stark contrast, concerning proportion of young drivers aged 17-20, the graph shows opposing trend, with numbers decreasing over the period 1996-2006. 
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • The ratio of male driving license holders was stable at 70% from 1976-1981, then increasing relatively gradually to 78% in 1996, before growing slightly and steadily, approaching the peak at 80% in 2006.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "stable" tiếng anh 
    • The rise for female counterparts was from 30% to the highest point at 60% over the same period. 
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • Regarding the percentage of drivers aged 17-20, both male and female group underwent downward trend, from 50%-45% for the former and from 30%-20% for the latter.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "trend" tiếng anh
    • The change in male group was less considerable than that in female counterpart.

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