Phân biệt dạng "Discuss both views & Give your opinion" & dạng "outweigh"

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt dạng "Discuss both views & Give your opinion" & dạng "outweigh"

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• Đề  ví  dụ  1: Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
• Đề  ví  dụ  2: People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

1.2.1. Dàn bài

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đối với đề 1 nếu  muốn  viết  theo  hướng  ủng  hộ theo quan điểm số 1 là  "personal happiness is closely related to economic success" thì  sẽ  bố  cục  bài  theo  hướng  như  sau: 
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that it depends on other factors
    • Main idea: Advocates of this perspective emphasize the importance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose or fulfillment in life. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They argue that even individuals with substantial wealth may experience unhappiness if they lack meaningful connections, suffer from health issues, or feel unfulfilled in their personal or professional lives. 
        • This viewpoint highlights the multifaceted nature of happiness, suggesting that it is influenced by a combination of emotional, social, and psychological factors.
      • Example: Despite financial success, celebrities and wealthy individuals often face depression, substance abuse, and personal struggles, revealing the inadequacy of wealth in ensuring happiness. The burdens of fame, hectic schedules, and a lack of authentic connections can lead to significant personal challenges, underscoring the complexity of achieving contentment beyond material prosperity.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Financial stability provides individuals with the means to fulfill basic needs and pursue a comfortable lifestyle.
      • Supporting idea: Having a secure income allows for access to healthcare, education, and a higher quality of life, contributing significantly to overall well-being. 
      • Example: Financial stability allows individuals to afford regular medical checkups, preventative care, and treatment for illnesses. This improves overall health outcomes, reduces stress associated with medical bills, and promotes a sense of security and well-being.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
    • Main idea 2: Economic success can provide opportunities for leisure, travel, and experiences that enhance happiness.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Leisure activities, such as hobbies or recreational pursuits, can provide a source of relaxation and enjoyment. 
        • Travel allows individuals to explore new cultures, broaden their perspectives, and create lasting memories. 
      • Example: For example, an artist might use saved income to travel to Paris to study the works of the Impressionists, enriching their artistic practice and understanding.

1.2.2. Bài mẫu cụ thể của IELTS TUTOR

The debate surrounding the correlation between personal happiness and economic success persists, with some asserting the pivotal role of financial prosperity in contentment, while others argue for the influence of various non-economic factors on happiness. I concur with the former idea.

On the one hand, advocates of the view that personal happiness extends beyond economic success emphasize the significance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose or fulfillment in life. This is because even individuals with substantial wealth may find themselves unhappy if they lack meaningful connections, suffer from health issues, or feel unfulfilled in their personal or professional lives. For example, despite financial success, celebrities and wealthy individuals often grapple with depression, substance abuse, and personal struggles, revealing the inadequacy of wealth in ensuring happiness.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

On the other hand, others, myself included, believe that there are many reasons why personal happiness is closely tied to economic success. Firstly, financial stability provides individuals with the means to fulfill basic needs and pursue a comfortable lifestyle. It is true that a secure income allows for access to healthcare, education, and an overall higher quality of life, contributing significantly to overall well-being. Secondly, economic success opens doors to opportunities for leisure, travel, and experiences that enhance happiness. As a matter of fact, leisure activities, such as hobbies or recreational pursuits, can provide a source of relaxation and enjoyment. For instance, an artist might use saved income to travel to Paris to study the works of the Impressionists, enriching their artistic practice and understanding.

In conclusion, although the importance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose are undeniable, I am of the opinion that financial stability provides the means to meet basic needs and access opportunities for leisure and experiences

1.3.1. Dàn bài

Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)

• • • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: The ability to work and live anywhere provides individuals with greater flexibility and mobility. 
        • Supporting idea: This can be especially beneficial for those seeking diverse cultural experiences, exploring new career opportunities, or accommodating personal preferences.
        • Example: A study by Stanford University's Institute for Economic Policy Research found that telecommuting arrangements allow for a better work-life balance and increased employee satisfaction >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Main idea 2: The globalization of work and living environments fosters cultural exchange. 
        • Supporting idea: Individuals have the opportunity to interact with people from different backgrounds, fostering a more interconnected and understanding world.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: The physical distance from family and friends can lead to social disconnection and feelings of isolation. 
        • Supporting idea: Building and maintaining meaningful relationships may become challenging in a constantly changing and mobile environment.
      • Main idea 2: Adapting to new cultures and societies can be demanding. 
        • Supporting idea: Differences in language, customs, and work practices may create cultural challenges that individuals need to navigate, potentially leading to stress or misunderstandings.
        • Example: In the context of an American technology company opening a branch in Japan, the significant cultural differences in language, customs, and work practices pose challenges for expatriate employees, particularly due to the high-context nature of Japanese business communication, relying on implicit meaning and shared cultural understanding, in contrast to the low-context communication style prevalent in many Western cultures.

1.3.2. Bài mẫu cụ thể của IELTS TUTOR

In the era of advanced communication technology and transportation, individuals now experience unparalleled freedom to work and live anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this trend carries both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why this tendency is positive. Firstly, the ability to work and live anywhere empowers individuals with unprecedented flexibility and autonomy in shaping their lifestyles and careers. This newfound freedom allows for a better work-life balance and increased job satisfaction, as evidenced by studies such as the one conducted by Stanford University's Institute for Economic Policy Research. Secondly, the globalization of work and living environments fosters valuable cultural exchange. In fact, individuals now have the opportunity to interact with people from different backgrounds, contributing to a more interconnected and understanding world.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

On the other hand, the trend of working and living anywhere is not without its drawbacks. To begin with, the physical distance from family and friends can lead to social disconnection and feelings of isolation. This is because as individuals embrace a constantly changing and mobile lifestyle, building and maintaining meaningful relationships become increasingly challenging, with potential consequences for emotional well-being. Moreover, adapting to new cultures and societies, another negative aspect of this trend, can be demanding. For instance, the high-context nature of Japanese business communication poses significant challenges for expatriate employees from Western cultures, as illustrated by the scenario of an American technology company opening a branch in Japan.

In conclusion, in my opinion, the trend of global mobility in the age of advanced communication technology and transportation has both positive and negative consequences.

• Đề  ví  dụ  1: Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài mẫu như sau:

The debate surrounding the correlation between personal happiness and economic success persists, with some asserting the pivotal role of financial prosperity in contentment, while others argue for the influence of various non-economic factors on happiness. In my opinion, this trend is a double-edged sword, bringing both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, personal happiness extends beyond economic success emphasize the significance of relationships, mental and physical health, and a sense of purpose or fulfillment in life. This is because even individuals with substantial wealth may find themselves unhappy if they lack meaningful connections, suffer from health issues, or feel unfulfilled in their personal or professional lives. For example, despite financial success, celebrities and wealthy individuals often grapple with depression, substance abuse, and personal struggles, revealing the inadequacy of wealth in ensuring happiness.>>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing

On the other hand, there are many reasons why personal happiness is closely tied to economic success. Firstly, financial stability provides individuals with the means to fulfill basic needs and pursue a comfortable lifestyle. It is true that a secure income allows for access to healthcare, education, and an overall higher quality of life, contributing significantly to overall well-being. Secondly, economic success opens doors to opportunities for leisure, travel, and experiences that enhance happiness. As a matter of fact, leisure activities, such as hobbies or recreational pursuits, can provide a source of relaxation and enjoyment. For instance, an artist might use saved income to travel to Paris to study the works of the Impressionists, enriching their artistic practice and understanding.

In conclusion, the trend of global mobility in the age of advanced communication technology and transportation is a nuanced phenomenon with both positive and negative consequences.

Với cách viết dạng "Outweigh" viết theo hướng PARTLY thì xem cách triển khai ở mục 1.3. Phân tích đề ví dụ 2 (với cách viết PARTLY advantages = disadvantages) mà IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn ở trên

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