Phân tích "Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 (Về problems)
    • Main idea 1: Overpopulation can lead to overcrowding and poor quality housing in many large cities  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: One of the gravest problems that are facilitated by overpopulation is the deficiency of living space)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As we know that land resources are limited in nature, and the area available for residence is also finite. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "residence" tiếng anh
        • Since the majority of the population resides in urban areas, the ability to shelter every individual becomes an arduous task.
        • Poorly heated or damp housing could cause significant health problems, resulting in illness, such as bronchitis or pneumonia. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "cause"
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Another serious consequence of overcrowding is a rising crime rate. 
      • Supporting idea: poor living conditions may lead young people in particular to take desperate measures and turn to crime or drugs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "condition"
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 (Về solutions)
    • Main idea 1: (Governments) proper city planning must be undertaken by the administration to tackle the current situation of overpopulation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "administration"
      • Supporting idea: With a reliable system, the plight of innumerable urban dwellers can be resolved.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Individuals) Individuals should obey the rule that the government implements such as spreading awareness among people and introducing suitable policies to curb the growth rate of population >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "growth" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, introduction of family planning programs and easy access to safe and effective contraceptive options. As fertility depends on the age of marriage, minimum age of marriage should be fixed and firmly implemented by law.
• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: 
  • Problems
    • Due to the issue of overcrowding, the collective standard of living also declines considerably in urban cities. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng giới từ "due to" tiếng anh
    • As the number of inhabitants surges, the means of the local authorities to provide decent public services like safe drinking water, sanitation and proper food is hampered.
  • Solutions:
    • The government can establish strict birth control regulations to reduce population increase, and the concept of family planning should be promoted to the poor and underprivileged.
    • The government may develop rural areas by providing adequate infrastructure and providing employment opportunities for youth, thereby preventing people from relocating to urban areas. 
    • The government might invest in new modes of transportation to alleviate traffic congestion.

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