Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "If people who go to live in other countries, they should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER-BASED 25/6/2022)
I. Đề bài
If people who go to live in other countries, they should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: the refusal to adapt to host environment would create a cultural barrier for immigrants. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they do not conform to the norms of social behaviour in the host country)
- Supporting idea:
- It will become almost impossible for them to blend into their new environment.
- This leads to social isolation, which has negative influences on people’s lives.
- If immigrants behave in accordance with the local norms, they will be accepted easily by local inhabitants, and as a result, they can receive/gain respects and affections as well as some help from the local. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: local people will be more welcoming when they feel that the newcomers are showing respect for the local way of life HOẶC: The establishment of closer links with the host community might lead to greater integration and mutual understanding) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "understanding" tiếng anh
- Example: For example, when the enterprises want to expand their production in a new country, they must be aware of business practices there, which provides them with useful information to maximise profits. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: For example, an entrepreneur who comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the business practices of that country) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "useful / useless" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: the refusal to adapt to host environment would create a cultural barrier for immigrants. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they do not conform to the norms of social behaviour in the host country)
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: it is logical/true that limited knowledge of local customs may result in some illegal actions in the host country and make local/native people unpleased. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Example: For instance, in Singapore, one of the cleanest countries in Asia, local residents consider anyone dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in the public. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In Singapore, for instance, residents will consider newcomers dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places)
- Main idea: it is logical/true that limited knowledge of local customs may result in some illegal actions in the host country and make local/native people unpleased. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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