Phân tích "Some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. Other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm other think that they are just relaxation
    • Main idea 1: Individuals are capable of distinguishing between fiction and reality, and that violent films provide an outlet for people to release stress and anxiety. 
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    • Main idea 2: The banning of violent films would infringe on freedom of expression and limit artistic creativity >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ"creativity"(Diễn đạt"sáng tạo"tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea:
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  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Exposure to violent imagery can desensitize individuals to real-life violence and lead to aggressive behavior, as well as increase anxiety and fear.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Research has shown that exposure to violent media can have negative effects on individuals, especially children and adolescents who are still developing their cognitive and emotional regulation skills >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "regulation" tiếng anh
        • Studies have linked exposure to violent media to increased aggression, decreased empathy, and desensitization to violence. 
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    • Main idea 2: Some individuals may be more susceptible to these negative effects, such as those with pre-existing mental health issues.
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