Phân tích "Many people say that companies, factory owners and private tour operators should pay the bills for cleaning up pollution, instead of the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people say that companies, factory owners and private tour operators should pay the bills for cleaning up pollution, instead of the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people say that companies, factory owners and private tour operators should pay the bills for cleaning up pollution, instead of the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: factories play a very significant role in polluting the environment.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Factories release poisonous gases and other waste products that are harmful to the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH 
        • Sometimes these waste products which are full of hazardous substances are simply dumped into oceans and rivers >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "substance" tiếng anh
        • Many companies make large amounts of money by ignoring laws about pollution and dumping waste in rivers or pumping it into the air. 
        • Some of their profits should definitely be used to pay to clean up the places they pollute.
        • If factories are held responsible for cleaning up the pollution they cause, they will adopt newer technologies that are less polluting. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: If each corporation has to pay for mitigating pollution problems, it will take more deliberate actions to limit their effluents flow into water channels and fumes expelled from their companies)
      • Example: For instance, in some countries, factories have to pay for the damage they do to the environment, and as a result, there is very low pollution level in spite of a large number of mechanical factories >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "damage" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Tour operators can be held responsible for the pollution in many tourist spots. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Some of the most beautiful regions in the world that attract millions of visitors every year have become some sort of dumping ground for waste.
        • Plastic bottles and carry bags that visitors throw around have made these places unclean and unhygienic. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "plastic" & "plastic pollution" IELTS.
      • Example: 

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