Phân tích "Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities. Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages?'' IELTS Writing Task 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities. Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities. Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: when the friend circle expands across international borders, the result is cultural dilution. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "expand" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  In an effort to fit in and avoid cultural misunderstandings, people may start to adopt more universal, globally accepted behaviors and beliefs, which can dilute the distinctiveness of their original culture.
      • Example: An example of cultural dilution stemming from an expanded international friend circle is the increasing use of English as a lingua franca, which may lead to a decline in native languages and the adoption of English-language cultural norms and values.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: online socializing confines people into a virtual world of an altered emotional status, which is far different from a real inter-personal relationship.
      • Supporting idea: Online communication often lacks essential nonverbal cues, such as body language and tone of voice, making it challenging to fully understand and interpret emotions accurately.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: An example of how online socializing can confine people into a virtual world of an altered emotional status is "catfishing," where individuals create fake personas, leading to deceptive emotional connections and potential harm for victims.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: there are less constraints to interact online
        • Supporting idea: For example, one can express his emotions any time through texts, pictures, audio files or even video calls. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "express" tiếng anh
        • Example: Online communication offers creative avenues for emotional expression, including emojis, GIFs, stickers, images, and videos, adding depth and personality to messages.
      • Main idea 2: it helps to widen a circle of friends of similar interest, which might not always happen with the local community. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "happen" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: Online applications have online translation facilities, which no longer makes language a barrier. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "facility" tiếng anh 
        • Example: For instance, international exposure is possible with online social media like Instagram, Twitter, Hike or WhatsApp. 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: when the friend circle expands across international borders, the result is cultural dilution. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "across" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:  In an effort to fit in and avoid cultural misunderstandings, people may start to adopt more universal, globally accepted behaviors and beliefs, which can dilute the distinctiveness of their original culture.
        • Example: An example of cultural dilution stemming from an expanded international friend circle is the increasing use of English as a lingua franca, which may lead to a decline in native languages and the adoption of English-language cultural norms and values.
      • Main idea 2: online socializing confines people into a virtual world of an altered emotional status, which is far different from a real inter-personal relationship.
        • Supporting idea: Online communication often lacks essential nonverbal cues, such as body language and tone of voice, making it challenging to fully understand and interpret emotions accurately.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Example: An example of how online socializing can confine people into a virtual world of an altered emotional status is "catfishing," where individuals create fake personas, leading to deceptive emotional connections and potential harm for victims.

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