Phân tích"These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them.Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 25/4/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 24/4/2022).

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development? (computer-based 25/4/2022)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: this shift enables children in families to learn multiple languages.
      • Supporting idea: This is because at home parents talk to their children in their native language and at school teachers talk in the host country’s language. Living in this style helps children to learn more than one language much easier. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "help"
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: people from the under developed countries prefer to move to the developed nations for better education for their children and a higher standard of living for the whole family. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, many families are moving from Vietnam to Canada and Australia for their betterment of life standard.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý IELTS 7.0 CÓ KHÓ KHÔNG?
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1:  Working overseas would enrich and broaden the life experience of the workers and their families. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "experience" và "experiences" trong tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: They could have the chance to visit many great and historical places in the new country, learn a new language and make many new friends.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2:  people from the under developed countries prefer to move to the developed nations for better education for their children and a higher standard of living for the whole family. 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example:  For instance, many families are moving from Vietnam to Canada and Australia for their betterment of life standard.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: children in the family start losing their cultural and traditional values.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This is because they follow the host country’s festivals and their cultural norms to live their life. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "norm" tiếng anh
          • This makes them away from their origin country’s values.
        • Example: a recent study by Cambridge University found that nearly 40% of children who moved to another country due to their parent’s work had lost their own country’s traditions and culture. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "own" để nhấn mạnh 
      • Main idea 2: children and older people have to experience cultural shocks when they migrate to a new country.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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