Phân tích"People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world what are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world what are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world what are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1:  it is not taught in schools.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: people’s lack of comprehension about nature can be attributed to education systems which place excessive emphasis on academic disciplines HOẶC: they are insufficiently taught about this topic in schools) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ LACK trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Biology is not one of the subjects that holds great importance in most schools these days.
        • Students today spend most of their time studying academic subjects such as Mathematics but rarely have a field trip to get close to nature. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: most academic programs in many countries only focus on theory instead of providing students with practice)
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    • Main idea 2: people are not close to nature and therefore do not appreciate or understand its significance. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Kids these days spend their free time playing computer games or staring at a smartphone or TV screen while adults are endlessly working or pursuing other leisure activities, which tends to disconnect them from the natural world. 
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    • Có thể tham khảo thêm ý khác: 
      • Main idea: this tendency may be the result of the lack of social campaigns.
      • Supporting idea: Specifically, these campaigns would be able to educate a great number of citizens about nature with the support of media development. However, they do not receive sufficient investments, which results in the fact that there are few contents shown to the public with little quality. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "Citizen" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1:  the environment, a topic whose significance has long been under-estimated, should be a compulsory subject at school >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "compulsory" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: As a result, young generation’s environmental awareness is improved, resulting in their proper actions in the future. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Diễn đạt "yếu tố tương lai" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "in the future")
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Environment-associated articles and videos should be widely and frequently produced and broadcasted on social media. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This source of information is easily accessible, capturing more inhabitants’ attention and providing them with basic knowledge of environmental problems.
        • As climate change becomes more serious, articles and videos of this theme have been appearing with increasing frequency, capturing more inhabitants’ attention and providing them with basic knowledge of environmental problems.
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