Phân tích "If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 29/2/2024 + 2/11/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: Some people define their success in life as being able to move to higher management positions (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a large section of society likes to remain engaged in work because through this activity they get a sense of accomplishment)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many working professionals value their work, and thus being able to climb up the career ladder is considered a major achievement for them.
        • Being social creatures, human beings want to excel in their lives, and they want society to know about their success. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
        • Once they get initial success, they start liking their work and find it difficult to leave it.
      • Example: For example, during the lockdown due to Covid Pandemic, many people have gone into depression by sitting idle at home. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for example"
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Work provides us with much-needed fun and entertainment (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The regular participation in work breaks the monotony in life and make us feel happy)
      • Supporting idea: the time we put at work passes quickly, and this make us feel happy by keeping our worries at bay. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng trạng từ "quickly" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For instance, a teacher finds joy in not only teaching but also engaging with students and planning lessons, with a workday filled with diverse activities that make time pass quickly, leaving them with a sense of accomplishment and satisfaction as their mind stays focused on productive tasks rather than personal worries.

• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể tham khảo các ý sau cùng IELTS TUTOR:
  • Main idea 1: People do not want to be tied to their careers because they value their personal time or family time >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "value" tiếng anh
    • Example: For example, most women would gladly give up their careers in order to spend quality time with their children. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They would rather sacrifice their big pay check rather than miss out the important milestones of their children)
  • Main idea 2: it is not their passion because they would rather pursue their passions such as music, arts and so on >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PARAPHRASE "AND SO ON" (Diễn đạt "vân vân..." tiếng anh)

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

If given the choice, some may believe people would prefer a life without work over one spent working excessively. However, I totally disagree with this statement, as work provides a sense of achievement and serves as an essential source of purpose and happiness.

Firstly, many people view success as progressing in their careers and moving to higher positions. For example, working professionals often find pride in climbing the career ladder, considering it a significant accomplishment that reflects their dedication and hard work. As social beings, humans strive to excel, desiring acknowledgment from society for their achievements. This sense of accomplishment becomes a powerful motivator, making it difficult for individuals to leave their careers once they start seeing progress. For instance, during the Covid-19 lockdowns, many people experienced feelings of depression and frustration due to inactivity, highlighting how essential work is to mental well-being and fulfillment.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, work brings much-needed variety and enjoyment to our lives, helping break the monotony of daily routines. The time spent working tends to pass quickly, as individuals stay engaged in diverse tasks and interactions, which keeps them from dwelling on personal worries. This engagement in work can bring genuine happiness, as it provides a balanced and fulfilling daily structure. For instance, those in creative or dynamic jobs often find their roles not only entertaining but also enriching, as they experience a blend of challenges and rewards that contribute to their overall happiness.

In conclusion, work is fundamental to a fulfilling life, offering both a sense of accomplishment and happiness, making it unlikely that people would choose a life entirely without work.

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