Phân tích "Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. 
    • Main idea: Complying with all of children’s everyday wishes may result in them forming the habit of selfishness >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"comply"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because when allowed to choose whatever they want to eat or wear on a daily basis, they may become accustomed to not caring about other people’s preferences when making a decision. 
        • This habit will stay with them as they grow up, creating a selfish society
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này  >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "conform" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: Children who are given the freedom to choose for themselves become more confident in the long run, and their decision-making ability is enhanced.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The more children make decision, the more assertive they will be. 
        • This will help them when they become adults and enable them to lead independent lives
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 1: Children should learn for themselves what is wrong and right, and they need to demonstrate their personalities >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "Need" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: If children do not know how to deal with problems for themselves, they will not able to solve a unique problem >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG CÂU ĐIỀU KIỆN
      • Example: 

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