Phân tích "People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu IELTS TUTOR partly agree với quan điểm này, tức là không phủ nhận positive effects của advertising nhiều nhưng mà negative effects của nó cũng không ít, thì ở introduction IELTS TUTOR phải khẳng định cho được ý trên. 
  • Mở bài mẫu:
    • Stepping into the 21st century, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the ongoing phenomenon that advertising is increasingly popular. In my view, this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures.
• Đến phần thân bài 1, IELTS TUTOR sẽ phân tích những mặt positive effects của advertising là gì và tại sao không hề sai khi the positive effects outweigh negative effects, when advertising gains popularity
  • Thân bài 1 mẫu
    • On one hand, the mushroomING/EXPONENTIAL growth of advertising can be seen as beneficial for personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, advertisements / COMMERCIALS / PIECES OF ADVERTISEMENTS / ADVERTS benefits BENEFIT consumers a lot, especially given that buyers can turn to advertising as a useful source of information. In fact, some advertisements might disclose detailed information about products like health hazards of overeating some types of food, enabling consumers to make more judicious buying decisions. From an economic perspective, advertising promotes consumerism, meaning that thanks to eye-catching advertisements, consumers tend to buy more products. This, in turn, gives a boost to the whole economy as a whole.

• Đến phần thân bài 2, IELTS TUTOR sẽ phân tích những điểm negative effects của advertising, và vì sao một phần nào đó không đồng ý hoàn toàn với câu statement của đề bài the positive effects outweigh negative effects, when advertising gains popularity
  • Thân bài 2 mẫu
    • On the other hand, the personal and economic arguments above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, consumers, particularly youngsters are easily susceptible to the effect of a commercialS when AS one of the initial purposes of advertising is to give products an exaggerated account. In other words, advertisers have a tendency to stress attributes of products that are likely to draw customers’ attention, while playING down THE side-effects. As a consequence, consumers are easily misled into making impulsive purchases when buying unnecessary things. Secondly, from the economic point of view, an THE increasing popularity of advertising can very well drive the economy to develop unsustainably, as only multinational companies with their loud/HUGE budget are capable of pouring millions of dollars into advertisements in (THE) hope of grabbing viewers’ attention. By contrast, there seems to be no way for disadvantaged enterprises to hook viewers, especially in the light that they are unable to advertise their products via the mass media, thereby pushing such companies into ONTO the verge of bankruptcy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "in consequence, as a consequence" 

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