Phân tích "Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think there are some benefits. 
    • Main idea 1: travelling on public transport can allow people time to get things done that they have been too busy to complete. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "public transport" 
      • Supporting idea: sitting on a bus or train is also a great time to relax and read a book.
      • Example: 
        • For example, some school kids have to spend up to one hour travelling by bus every day and this is a great opportunity for them to get their homework done.
        • Some adults may use this time to catch up on some unfinished work on their laptop, or plan their work schedule for the day. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "adults" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Some people can use these longer rides to have a quick nap to recharge their energies.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Longer rides often provide a relatively stable and comfortable environment, especially in vehicles equipped with amenities like cushioned seats, climate control, and minimal noise. 
        • This conducive environment can make it easier for people to relax and fall asleep.
      • Example: For example, it is easy to catch sight of office workers taking a nap on the subway in Japan, a country where people have the culture of long working hours.
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý ý khác: while sitting on a train or a bus, the bliss of solitude can give passengers moments of freedom to contemplate their own matters.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that this is a negative development nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
    • Main idea 1: Most people are stuck in traffic jams during rush hours, sitting on a motorbike breathing in toxic fumes from other vehicles, which in the long term can lead to a number of serious health issues. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Sitting in traffic jams exposes individuals to high levels of air pollution, primarily from vehicle emissions. 
        • These emissions contain harmful pollutants such as carbon monoxide, nitrogen oxides, particulate matter, and volatile organic compounds, which can have adverse effects on respiratory health and overall well-being.
    • Main idea 2: spending more and more time commuting leaves less time for other more important activities, like spending time with loved ones, or pursuing one’s hobbies. 
      • Supporting idea: This explains why longer working hours have been shown to have a negative effect on mental health, which is unwanted for both the individual and the institution they are a part of. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh

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