Giải đề"People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems if people try to achieve this balance? How to overcome these problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems if people try to achieve this balance? How to overcome these problems?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What are the problems if people try to achieve this balance? 
    • Main idea 1: Balancing work and personal life requires effective time management. 
      • Supporting idea: Many people struggle to prioritize tasks and allocate sufficient time to both work and personal activities.
      • Example: 
        • A study by Burke et al. (2010) found a link between work-life balance and employee well-being. Those with better balance reported lower stress and higher job satisfaction.

• Another study by Kalliath et al. (2010) showed that effective time management strategies were associated with reduced work-family conflict.
  • • Main idea 2: With the rise of remote work and technology, it has become increasingly difficult for people to establish clear boundaries between work and personal life. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: Constant connectivity can blur these lines and make it challenging to fully disconnect from work.
      • Example: The transition to remote work has left my friend Sarah, a graphic designer, struggling to disconnect after hours as work emails and instant messages continuously interrupt her evenings and weekends, hindering her ability to unwind and risking burnout due to the persistent intrusion of her professional life into her personal time.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 How to overcome these problems?
    • Main idea 1: Utilize time management techniques, such as prioritizing tasks, setting SMART goals, and using productivity tools to optimize your workflow and make the most of your time.
      • Supporting idea: It allows individuals to focus their efforts on high-priority activities, track their progress effectively, ensure tasks are achievable within given timeframes, maintain relevance to overall objectives, and ultimately optimize their workflow to maximize productivity and efficiency.
    • Main idea 2: Establish clear boundaries between work and personal life. 
      • Supporting idea: This may involve defining specific work hours, creating a designated workspace, and setting aside uninterrupted time for personal activities.
      • Example: To improve his work-life balance, my uncle David, a software engineer, establishes clear boundaries by setting specific work hours, disabling work notifications after 6 pm, and designating a separate workspace in his home, enabling him to mentally disconnect from work. Additionally, he schedules personal activities in his calendar, treating them as significant commitments, ensuring he can fully engage in both his professional and personal life without feeling constantly overwhelmed.

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