Phân tích "Many parents are worried about the increasing amount of violence in computer games and TV programs for children. Is violent entertainment harmful for children? What can be done to about this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many parents are worried about the increasing amount of violence in computer games and TV programs for children. Is violent entertainment harmful for children? What can be done to about this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many parents are worried about the increasing amount of violence in computer games and TV programs for children. Is violent entertainment harmful for children? What can be done to about this problem?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - Yes
    • Main idea: Exposure to violent entertainment has a negative impact on children's behaviour, leading to increased aggression and desensitization to violence. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Children who are exposed to violent entertainment may become less empathetic and more likely to engage in aggressive behaviour. 
      • Example: One example to illustrate the negative impact of exposure to violent entertainment on children's behavior is a study conducted by the American Psychological Association. The study found that children who were exposed to violent media, such as video games and TV shows, were more likely to engage in aggressive behaviors, such as fighting and bullying. 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Parents should monitor their children's exposure to violent entertainment and ensure that they are not exposed to excessive amounts. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They can do this by setting limits on the amount of time their children spend playing violent computer games or watching violent TV programs. 
        • They can also actively seek out non-violent alternatives for their children, such as educational games and programs. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ"educational"tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Governments should consider regulating the availability of violent entertainment to children through laws and regulations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "regulation" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Governments can work with the media industry to develop standards and guidelines for the creation and promotion of non-violent entertainment options for children.
      • Example: 

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