Phân tích "If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to see themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (PAPER-BASED 26/6/2022 + 28/5/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to see themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (PAPER-BASED 26/6/2022)

If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to see themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Elderly care is a basic responsibility >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "basic"
      • Supporting idea:
        • Children, who have an obligation to their original care-givers, are in their best positions to provide loving support. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "obligation" tiếng anh 
        • This could include living with them, supplying money, or helping them with medical bills.
      • Example: In Vietnam, there is a strong cultural value placed on filial piety and respect for one's parents and caregivers. This often translates into children feeling a sense of obligation towards their original care-givers, especially their parents. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: While we were children, our parents were there for our supportive role, so we need to do the same when our parents become old >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "role" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • As parents age, there is a near absolute chance they will have some combination of physical, mental, or financial difficulties. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "chance" tiếng anh
        • Since most older people are unable to work full-time jobs, the duty of care naturally falls to younger family members, which is reasonable.
        • This is because younger individuals possess the physical abilities and resources necessary to provide the needed support and care.
      • Example: For instance, in Vietnam, as adults, when our parents reach old age and require support, it is our obligation to step up and provide them with the same level of care and support they provided us when we were children.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

As people age, they often face physical, mental, and financial challenges that hinder their ability to care for themselves. I totally agree that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting elderly relatives who can no longer see to their own needs.

Firstly, elderly care is a fundamental responsibility that younger family members should uphold. Children, who owe their upbringing and early care to their parents, are in the best position to provide loving and effective support. This support might encompass cohabitation, financial assistance, or covering medical expenses. For example, in Vietnam, there is a strong cultural value placed on filial piety and respect for one's parents. This cultural norm often translates into children feeling a deep sense of obligation to care for their elderly parents, providing them with the necessary support and ensuring their well-being.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, it is only fair that children reciprocate the care and support they received from their parents when they were young. As parents age, they are highly likely to experience a decline in their physical and mental health, as well as financial stability. Since most older people are unable to work full-time jobs, the duty of care naturally falls to younger family members, which is reasonable. Younger individuals typically have the physical capabilities and financial resources required to provide the needed support. For instance, in Vietnam, adults recognize the obligation to step up and offer the same level of care to their aging parents that they received during their childhood, ensuring a cycle of support and care across generations.

In conclusion, it is both a moral and practical necessity for younger family members to take responsibility for their elderly relatives who are no longer capable of caring for themselves.

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