Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic Media IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng negative):
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative
- Main idea: since most adolescents are malleable, bad examples from celebrities can develop moral issues in them >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "developing"
- Supporting idea:
- Adolescents often look up to celebrities as role models.
- When these figures engage in morally questionable behavior, such as substance abuse or reckless behavior, adolescents may perceive these actions as acceptable or even desirable.
- Example:
- Many teenagers who look up to Hollywood figures such as Paris Hilton believe that they should pursue a glamorous, material life with parties and nightclubs >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "follow" tiếng anh
- Other celebrities like Kim Kardashian present a wrong message to the young generation, suggesting that using scandals and PR stunts are the most effective methods to gain attention and be successful.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative
- Main idea: such reverence for celebrities in the field of entertainment would possibly cause a detriment to social security >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- if their idols were criticized due to their scandals, they would try to sugar-coat the situation or even trigger arguments >> This would be really challenging for authorities to maintain security.
- Example: A typical example of this is the chaos during and after Korean singers and musical bands’ show in Vietnam a few years ago when the crowd of fans went uncontrollable, which caused irritation for the locals and also danger to the fans themselves
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In recent years, there has been growing concern over the admiration young people have for media and sports stars, despite the fact that many of these celebrities do not set a good example. I believe that this trend is a negative development due to its harmful impact on adolescents' morals and the potential threat it poses to social stability.
Firstly, the influence of media and sports stars who engage in questionable behavior can lead to moral issues among impressionable adolescents. Young people often view celebrities as role models, and when these figures exhibit behaviors like substance abuse or reckless actions, they may consider these actions acceptable or even desirable. For instance, many teenagers who idolize Hollywood celebrities like Paris Hilton are misled into pursuing a glamorous, materialistic lifestyle centered around parties and nightclubs. Similarly, figures like Kim Kardashian promote the notion that scandal and publicity stunts are effective ways to achieve success, sending the wrong message to the younger generation.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, the excessive reverence for celebrities in entertainment can pose a threat to social security. When celebrities face criticism for their scandals, their devoted fans may attempt to defend them aggressively, leading to public disturbances. This creates challenges for authorities in maintaining order. A notable example is the chaos that erupted during a Korean pop concert in Vietnam, where uncontrollable fans caused disruptions, endangering both themselves and the public. Such incidents highlight the dangers of blind admiration for celebrities and its detrimental effects on society.
In conclusion, the trend of young people idolizing media and sports stars who do not set good examples is a negative development, as it contributes to moral decay among adolescents and threatens social stability.
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