🔥Phân tích"Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 4/8/2023 & 22/3/2025 )

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
  • Main idea: medical services are extremely costly all around the world.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "expensive" IELTS SPEAKING & WRITING
    • Supporting idea: 
      • doctors charge a very high fee from patients, and they tend to  recommend medical tests which are unnecessary and try to shell-out patients to increase their profits (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: many medical tests recommended by doctors in big hospitals are not relevant to patient’s disease; however, they do so to increase their earning)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "charge" tiếng anh
      • many people avoid to go to the hospital and read online to find a cure for their medical condition
    • Example: 
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: negative 
  • Main idea:  there is uncertainty about online articles whether these are written by medical professionals or not (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: it is quite hard to verify that the content posted online is written by a medical professional)
    • Supporting idea: online posts can mislead people about the disease and can be dangerous to their life.
    • Example:  in this COVID-19 pandemic, there is a surge in false rumors posted online about the cure from COVID-19 virus    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "verify" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals have turned to the cyberspace (không gian mạng - the virtual environment of the Internet) for medical consultation (tư vấn y tế - professional medical advice) instead of visiting a physician. This trend can be attributed to the exorbitant (quá cao - unreasonably high) cost of medical services, but its implications remain largely detrimental.

A primary reason why people opt for online medical advice is the prohibitive (cực kỳ cao - excessively expensive) expenses associated with professional healthcare. Many practitioners (bác sĩ hành nghệ - medical professionals) charge hefty (nặng nề - large and difficult to afford) consultation fees and often prescribe superfluous (dư thừa - unnecessary) medical tests to maximize profits. As a result, patients, particularly those from economically disadvantaged (bất lợi về tài chính - lacking financial resources) backgrounds, find it more practical to seek health-related information on the Internet. Given the vast accessibility of symptom-checker (công cụ tra triệu chứng - online tool to analyze symptoms) websites and virtual self-diagnosis (tự chẩn đoán - diagnosing oneself without a professional), individuals often resort to online platforms instead of incurring exorbitant hospital expenses.

Despite the convenience, this phenomenon is largely detrimental (có hại - harmful) due to the unverified (chưa được xác minh - not confirmed as accurate) nature of online medical information. Unlike licensed physicians (bác sĩ có giấy phép - doctors certified to practice medicine), many online contributors (người đóng góp nội dung - individuals posting content) lack formal expertise, making their advice potentially misleading (gây hiểu nhầm - giving the wrong idea). A striking example is the infodemic (bê nhạn thông tin sai lệch - excessive misleading information) witnessed during the COVID-19 pandemic, where countless fallacious (sai lầm - based on incorrect reasoning) remedies circulated online, prompting individuals to self-medicate with harmful substances. Such misinformation can lead to severe health complications, exacerbating rather than alleviating medical conditions.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In conclusion, while the high cost of medical services drives people to seek online advice, this shift poses significant risks due to unreliable information. Hence, the widespread reliance (sự phụ thuộc rộng rãi - extensive dependence) on the Internet for medical guidance is an overall negative development.

New Vocabulary List:

1. Cyberspace (không gian mạng) - the virtual environment of the Internet.

2. Medical consultation (tư vấn y tế) - professional medical advice.

3. Exorbitant (quá cao) - unreasonably high.

4. Prohibitive (cực kỳ cao) - excessively expensive.

5. Practitioners (bác sĩ hành nghệ) - medical professionals.

6. Hefty (nặng nề) - large and difficult to afford.

7. Superfluous (dư thừa) - unnecessary.

8. Economically disadvantaged (bất lợi về tài chính) - lacking financial resources.

9. Symptom-checker (công cụ tra triệu chứng) - online tool to analyze symptoms.

10. Self-diagnosis (tự chẩn đoán) - diagnosing oneself without a professional.

11. Detrimental (có hại) - harmful.

12. Unverified (chưa được xác minh) - not confirmed as accurate.

13. Licensed physicians (bác sĩ có giấy phép) - doctors certified to practice medicine.

14. Contributors (người đóng góp nội dung) - individuals posting content.

15. Misleading (gây hiểu nhầm) - giving the wrong idea.

16. Infodemic (bê nhạn thông tin sai lệch) - excessive misleading information.

17. Fallacious (sai lầm) - based on incorrect reasoning.

18. Widespread reliance (sự phụ thuộc rộng rãi) - extensive dependence.

Synonyms & Antonyms:

• Exorbitant

  • Synonyms: outrageous, astronomical, extortionate

  • Antonyms: reasonable, moderate, affordable

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Many practitioners charge exorbitant fees, making healthcare inaccessible."

• Misleading

  • Synonyms: deceptive, erroneous, inaccurate

  • Antonyms: clear, reliable, accurate

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Many online contributors provide misleading medical information."

• Detrimental

  • Synonyms: harmful, damaging, adverse

  • Antonyms: beneficial, advantageous, helpful

  • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "This phenomenon is largely detrimental due to unverified medical advice."

Difficult Grammar Structures:

1. Cleft sentence (Câu chia tách)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "It is the exorbitant cost of medical services that drives people to seek online advice."

   • (Chính là chi phí y tế quá cao khiến con người tìi t\xecm kiếm lời khuyêi khuy\xean trêi khuy\xean tr\xean mạng.)

2. Participle phrase (Câu dùng câu phứ phân từ)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "Given the vast accessibility of symptom-checker websites, individuals often resort to online platforms."

   • (Với sự tiếp cận rộng rãi đối với các trang web kiểm tra triệu chứng, cá nhân thường xuyêng xuy\xean tìng xuy\xean t\xecm đến cán c\xe1c nền tảng trực tuyến.)

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