Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"circumstance"tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: Individuals who grow up in deprived and disadvantaged environments often lack access to basic needs such as education, healthcare, and stable employment.
- Supporting idea: Without these opportunities, they may turn to crime as a means of survival or to escape their circumstances.
- Example: An example of this could be seen in the high crime rates in low-income neighborhoods. People living in poverty may struggle to meet their basic needs such as food, housing, and healthcare, and may not have access to education and job opportunities. As a result, they may resort to criminal activities such as theft or drug dealing to make ends meet.
- Main idea 2: These individuals may be exposed to violence and crime from a young age, leading to a normalization of these behaviors.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
- Supporting idea: Children who witness criminal behavior in their communities may come to view it as a normal part of everyday life and may be more likely to engage in criminal activities themselves as they get older.
- Example: For example, children who grow up in households with domestic violence may become desensitized to violent behavior and may even replicate it in their own relationships.
- Main idea 1: Individuals who grow up in deprived and disadvantaged environments often lack access to basic needs such as education, healthcare, and stable employment.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: Individuals have a choice in their actions, and criminal behavior is a result of personal moral character >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: Individuals who commit crimes do so because they have a predisposition to violence and deviant behavior, regardless of their upbringing or environment.
- Example: Ted Bundy, despite his stable upbringing and education, committed numerous murders, suggesting that his criminal behavior stemmed from an inherent predisposition to violence and deviance, thus supporting the idea that personal moral character plays a crucial role in criminal actions.
- Main idea 2: Some individuals may have a predisposition towards criminal behavior due to factors such as genetics or childhood experiences.
- Supporting idea: Some research suggests that certain genetic and environmental factors may increase the likelihood of engaging in criminal behavior.
- Main idea 1: Individuals have a choice in their actions, and criminal behavior is a result of personal moral character >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"circumstance"tiếng anh
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Crime is a complex issue with multiple contributing factors. While some argue that most crimes result from circumstances like poverty and social problems, I believe they are caused by individuals who are inherently bad in nature.
On one hand, there are several factors that lead people to believe that most crimes stem from circumstances. Firstly, individuals who grow up in deprived environments often lack access to basic needs such as education, healthcare, and stable employment, leading them to potentially turn to crime as a means of survival or escape from their circumstances. For example, high crime rates in low-income neighborhoods can be attributed to individuals struggling to meet basic needs such as food, housing, and healthcare, and with limited access to education and job opportunities, they may resort to criminal activities like theft or drug dealing to make ends meet. Secondly, exposure to violence and crime from a young age can normalize these behaviors. For instance, children from households with domestic violence may become desensitized to violent behavior and replicate it in their own relationships.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, I do believe that crime is caused by individuals who are inherently bad in nature. Firstly, those who commit crimes may have a predisposition to violence and deviant behavior, regardless of their upbringing or environment. Ted Bundy, for instance, despite his stable upbringing and education, committed numerous murders. His actions suggest an inherent predisposition to violence and deviance, highlighting the role of personal moral character in criminal behavior. Secondly, some research indicates that genetic and environmental factors can increase the likelihood of engaging in criminal activities. For instance, a longitudinal study conducted by the National Institute of Justice followed a group of individuals from childhood into adulthood and found that those with a family history of criminal behavior were more likely to engage in similar activities.
In conclusion, while circumstances like poverty and social problems contribute to crime, I believe that personal moral character and inherent predispositions play a more significant role in criminal behavior.
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