Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development, however, others think the social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)
I. Đề bài
Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development, however, others think the social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic Economy IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng outweigh sẽ có 2 cách làm tuỳ thuộc vào điểm mà bản thân muốn target, nếu muốn điểm cao 7.0-7.5 có thể theo hướng partly (advantages = disadvantages)
- Cách 1: Cách viết TOTALLY
- Body 1: advantages of economic development > disadvantages
- Main idea 1: It reduces poverty and improves the quality of life.
- Supporting idea 1: While economy grows, more job opportunities are being generated >> The income from jobs can help the society escape poverty, and people can have a better standard of living >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG "WHILE" TIẾNG ANH
- Example 1: Between 1978 and 2015, China's rapid economic growth lifted approximately 800 million people out of extreme poverty, representing the largest poverty reduction in history. This boom generated millions of new jobs in manufacturing, construction, and service sectors, allowing many families to achieve higher incomes and improve their standards of living.
- Body 2:
- Main idea 1: People can have access to education because they can afford the tuition fee. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
- Supporting idea 1: Through education, people gain a variety of knowledge in many fields, and learn how to use it for a better world.
- Example 1: Germany's tuition-free university education, available to both domestic and international students in most public universities, promotes educational accessibility and fosters a highly educated workforce contributing significantly to fields such as engineering, medicine, and research.
- Body 1: advantages of economic development > disadvantages
- Cách 2: Cách viết partly lưu ý viết (advantages = disadvantages)
- Intro: advantages = disadvantages
- Body 1: On the one hand, many benefits are brought because of economic growth >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "economical" tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: It reduces poverty and improves the quality of life.
- Supporting idea: While economy grows, more job opportunities are being generated >> The income from jobs can help the society escape poverty, and people can have a better standard of living >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG "WHILE" TIẾNG ANH
- Example: Between 1978 and 2015, China's rapid economic growth lifted approximately 800 million people out of extreme poverty, representing the largest poverty reduction in history. This boom generated millions of new jobs in manufacturing, construction, and service sectors, allowing many families to achieve higher incomes and improve their standards of living.
- Main idea 2: People can have access to education because they can afford the tuition fee.
- Supporting idea: Through education, people gain a variety of knowledge in many fields, and learn how to use it for a better world.
- Example: Germany's tuition-free university education, available to both domestic and international students in most public universities, promotes educational accessibility and fosters a highly educated workforce contributing significantly to fields such as engineering, medicine, and research.
- Main idea 1: It reduces poverty and improves the quality of life.
- Body 2: On the other hand, some traditional values are deteriorating >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "deteriorate" tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: The materialistic lifestyle is caused by economic development
- Supporting idea: People tend to pursue more luxurious items without cherishing the things they have already owned >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "tend" tiếng anh
- Example: In societies with increasing living standards, the drive for a materialistic lifestyle is fueled by social comparison, as individuals gauge success and status through possessions and experiences, often leading to an insatiable pursuit of more, irrespective of genuine needs or financial constraints.
- Main idea 2: Higher economic growth is directly proportional to long hours of hard work.
- Supporting idea: Its first negative impact will be that the hard working parents will not be able to spare precious time for their children; hence, children will eventually get involved in anti social activities. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "affair" tiếng anh
- Example: For instance, the children of African-Americans in New York city are under the influence of criminal activities since their parents are too much occupied in their work.
- Main idea 1: The materialistic lifestyle is caused by economic development
- Cách 1: Cách viết TOTALLY
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The question of whether the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages is complex and multifaceted. In my opinion, this phenomenon brings both advantages and disadvantages to societies in equal measures.
On the one hand, this tendency brings forth a multitude of advantages. Firstly, economic growth leads to a reduction in poverty and an enhancement in living standards. In fact, economic growth typically creates employment opportunities, reducing unemployment rates and providing individuals with means to support themselves and their families. For instance, China's remarkable economic expansion between 1978 and 2015 lifted approximately 800 million people out of extreme poverty, creating millions of new job opportunities and elevating living standards for many families. Additionally, economic prosperity enables greater access to education, as seen in Germany's tuition-free university system, facilitating knowledge acquisition and societal advancement. This facilitates not only the acquisition of knowledge but also contributes to the advancement of society as a whole.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
On the other hand, economic development can erode traditional values and foster materialistic lifestyles. This is because the relentless pursuit of luxury goods and possessions often diminishes appreciation for existing possessions and nurtures discontentment. For example, in societies with rising living standards, individuals often equate success and status with material possessions, fueling an insatiable desire for more, regardless of genuine needs or financial constraints. Furthermore, the demanding nature of high economic growth can lead to long working hours, depriving parents of valuable time with their children and potentially exposing them to negative influences. In New York City, for instance, African-American children may be susceptible to involvement in criminal activities due to parental preoccupation with work affairs.
In conclusion, while economic development undoubtedly brings numerous benefits such as poverty reduction and improved access to education, it also poses challenges such as the erosion of traditional values and the proliferation of materialism.
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