Phân tích"More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm Sửa bài HS 6.0)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
  • What are the reasons for this trend?
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về eat healthy food) People are aware that a healthy diet is essential for good health and nutrition. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "aware" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It protects humans against many chronic noncommunicable diseases such as heart disease, diabetes and cancer. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về exercise regularly) It is widely known that regular physical activity can improve humans' muscle strength and boost their endurance. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Word form động từ của "ENDURE"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Exercise delivers oxygen and nutrients to their tissues and helps their cardiovascular system work more efficiently. 
        • When their heart and lung health improve, they have more energy to tackle daily chores.
      • Example: 
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2  
  • What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?  
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về eat healthy food) the government should increase the availability of healthy food through setting nutrition criteria for food served and sold in public settings. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: the government should ensure that the food served or sold in public settings contributes to healthy diets and saves lives). >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "ensure" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • shift fat consumption from saturated fats to unsaturated fats;
        • eliminate industrially-produced trans fats;
        • increase consumption of whole grains, vegetables, fruit, nuts and pulses; and
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về exercise regularly) the state ought to offer free public sports facilities
      • Supporting idea:
        • Public sports facilities have played a very important role in promoting physical activity and participation in leisure sports activities. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng" tiếng anh)
        • The government should improve the image of leisure sports and pursue the amelioration of service quality of public sports facilities
      • Example: 

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