Phân tích"Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries.Why is this happening?Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 31/3/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries.Why is this happening?Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 31/3/2024)

Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why is this happening?
  • Main idea 1: Airfares have become cheaper 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Companies like Boeing produce more efficient planes. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của từ "produce"
      • Competition intensifies between competing airlines (HOẶC: the supply more than meets demand for flights)
    • Example: The rise of budget airlines like AirAsia in Southeast Asia has shaken up the market. These airlines offer no-frills services and focus on maximizing passenger capacity, leading to significantly lower ticket prices .
  • Main idea 2: people want to learn more about unfamiliar cultures as during their trip, they are allowed to get exposed to local people and observe cultural differences here. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "allow" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: This gives them a chance to make a comparison of cultural traits in different nations >>  helps them enrich their knowledge and have a more profound understanding of the world. 
    • Example: My friend Sarah's decision to participate in a homestay program in a rural Thai village provided her with an immersive cultural experience, enabling her to observe daily routines, partake in traditional meals, and understand the significance of respecting elders, while also engaging in a cooking class to learn about local ingredients and techniques firsthand.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Is this a positive or negative development? - Positive 
  • Main idea 1: uplift several other sectors of the economy along with itself
    • Supporting idea: Hospitality, transportation, leisure are some of the industries that are greatly benefitted by the development of tourism. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS
    • Example: Thailand's thriving tourism industry demonstrates how tourism can bolster various sectors of the economy, particularly hospitality and transportation, where the influx of visitors has spurred the construction of new accommodations and increased demand for transportation services, consequently creating employment opportunities across construction, housekeeping, management, transportation, and customer service roles. 
  • Main idea 2: Local people can have more job opportunities in hotels or restaurants and therefore earn more money to improve their living standards. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • As tourism grows, there is a higher demand for hospitality services such as hotels and restaurants. 
      • This demand necessitates more staff, from housekeeping and kitchen staff to management and customer service roles.

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