Phân tích đề"Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education"IELTS WRITING

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss both views and give your opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đề bài có chữ only là đề bài mang tính tuyệt đối, với bài này nếu đồng ý với quan điểm số 2 là “it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work” thì có thể bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: viết về quan điểm “the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education”
    • Main idea 1: University education is mandatory to get some type of jobs.  
      • Supporting idea: People who choose to become a doctor, pharmacist, engineer, pilot etc. are required to complete their degrees before they can be able to get a job because this type of jobs need specialized knowledge before starting the career.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "specialize" & "specialized" tiếng anh
      • Example:
    • Main idea 2:  A plenty of employers might ask for high academic qualifications from people applying for some professional jobs. (hoặc Employers would prefer a person who has an adequate amount of knowledge to work efficiently with less training time)
      • Supporting idea: Today job market is more competitive and a bachelor’s degree or master’s degree in your resumé can be a huge advantage compared to other applicants >> For employers, a certificated university degree is a convincing proof of the competence of the employee. 
      • Example: 
        • For many high-paying jobs such as statisticians, economists, and medical jobs, master’s degree is one of the most vital requirements. 
        • Many top-level corporations prefer to provide more job opportunities for people with a university background rather than the others.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "job" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: viết về quan điểm “it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work” —> nêu rõ mình đồng ý với quan điểm này
    • Main idea 1: Working at early ages might help students to be more independent and responsible in their life through learning how to control their spending or how to enhance their knowledge and skill 
      • Supporting idea: if people start to work at the age of 18, they could earn money on their own and be able to live independently without their parents’ financial support  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "support" tiếng anh
      • Example: In fact, many students in Western countries tend to find a job after high school to afford their living
    • Main idea 2: People who choose to start their career early instead of going to university or college can have more opportunities to gain real experience and learn exclusive skills for their jobs. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This may bring out a good chance of getting promoted to higher positions such as managers or executives >< Students in university seem to be lack of practical experiences in working environment (Being an employee means more of responsibilities, job deadlines, etc) 
      • Example:

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