Phân tích"Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 15/9/2022 (computer-based))

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 15/9/2022 (computer-based))

Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: privately funded scientific research has stimulated innovation
      • Supporting idea: Individuals who conduct research on the behalf of commercial interests are typically encouraged to think creatively in developing new solutions to pervasive problems. 
      • Example: Founded and managed by tech magnate Elon Musk, SPACEX has introduced new solutions to existing problems in space transportation such as reducing production costs on their rockets by using 3D printing technology and mass production methods.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations will help them develop their own products and create competition in the marketplace. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "conduct" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Society will therefore benefit from new inventions and better products.
      • Example: Encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations, such as pharmaceutical companies investing in research for new drugs, not only fosters innovation and product development but also introduces healthy competition in the marketplace, ultimately benefiting society with new inventions and improved products.
         

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

While some advocate for government control over scientific research, I strongly disagree with this viewpoint, as privately funded research initiatives have proven to be crucial drivers of innovation and societal progress.

Firstly, privately funded scientific research has played a pivotal role in fostering innovation and technological advancements. Researchers working on behalf of commercial interests are often incentivized to think creatively and develop groundbreaking solutions to prevalent challenges. For instance, companies like SpaceX, under the leadership of tech visionary Elon Musk, have revolutionized space transportation by leveraging innovative technologies like 3D printing and mass production methods to reduce production costs and enhance efficiency.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Secondly, encouraging profit-driven companies to spearhead scientific investigations fosters competition and drives product development, benefiting society at large. By investing in research and development, companies can create new products and services, introducing healthy competition in the marketplace. For example, pharmaceutical companies conducting research on new drugs not only contribute to medical advancements but also stimulate innovation and offer consumers a wider range of treatment options, ultimately improving public health outcomes.

In conclusion, entrusting scientific research solely to governments overlooks the invaluable contributions of privately funded initiatives in driving innovation and societal progress for these above-mentioned reasons.

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