Phân tích"Many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with family and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects of this on family life and society as a whole?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 25/2/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with family and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects of this on family life and society as a whole?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 25/2/2023)

Many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with family and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects of this on family life and society as a whole?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: The reason why many people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with family and friends is multifaceted. 
    • Main idea 1: One reason is that many jobs require long working hours or even require people to take work home with them >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "require" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This leaves little time for people to relax and spend time with their loved ones. 
      • Example: My friend - John, a dedicated software engineer whose job demands long hours at the office and often requires taking unfinished tasks home, reflects a growing trend where many jobs necessitate intense commitment, leaving employees with limited time for relaxation and quality time with loved ones, significantly impacting their personal well-being and family relationships.
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, the rise of technology has made it easier for people to stay connected to work at all times, leading to the blurring of boundaries between work and personal life.
      • Supporting idea: the accessibility of work-related communication tools such as emails, messaging apps, and video conferencing allows employees to be reached by colleagues and superiors outside of traditional working hours, making it challenging to disconnect and set boundaries.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: 
    • Main idea 1: The effects of this on family life can be detrimental.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Parents who work long hours may have less time to spend with their children, leading to a breakdown in the parent-child relationship. 
        • Children may feel neglected and may turn to other forms of socialization, such as spending more time on their phones or with friends, which can lead to further isolation within the family unit >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: lead to sth
        • The lack of family time can also lead to a decrease in communication and understanding among family members.
    • Main idea 2: On a larger scale, the lack of time for socializing can lead to a decrease in social cohesion and community building. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When people are too busy with work, they may not have time to participate in community events or volunteer work >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "participate" tiếng anh
        • This can lead to a decline in community engagement and a breakdown in social structures.

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