Phân tích "Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Advances in transportation and communication have made it easier for people to travel, migrate, and connect with others across borders.
      • Supporting idea:  Increased global mobility has contributed to the movement of individuals seeking better opportunities or fleeing from conflict or hardship. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
      • Example: Vietnam's growing economy and industrial development have attracted workers from neighboring countries, such as Cambodia and Laos, who seek better job opportunities and higher wages. These individuals contribute to the workforce and the country's economic growth, but their presence also highlights the impact of increased global mobility on the movement of people across borders in search of better livelihoods.
    • Main idea 2: People often migrate to countries with stronger economies and greater job prospects. 
      • Supporting idea: They may be attracted by employment opportunities, higher wages, or the chance to start businesses and improve their economic circumstances.
      • Example: One real-life example in Vietnam is the increasing number of foreign entrepreneurs and investors who are drawn to the country's growing market and business-friendly environment. These individuals come from various cultural and ethnic backgrounds, bringing their skills, capital, and business ideas to Vietnam. 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - positive 
    • Main idea 1: The presence of diverse cultures and ethnic groups adds richness and diversity to society, promoting cultural exchange, understanding, and appreciation. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "diversity" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When people from different backgrounds come together, they bring their unique perspectives, traditions, languages, and customs, creating a vibrant tapestry of cultures within a society. 
        • This diversity fosters an environment where individuals can learn from one another, broaden their horizons, and gain a deeper understanding of different cultural practices and values.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Immigrants often bring unique skills, entrepreneurial spirit, and contributions to the workforce, which can stimulate economic growth and innovation.
      • Supporting idea: They can bring diverse knowledge and experiences, leading to increased creativity and innovation within industries. 
      • Example: 

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