Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 1: 
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 2 "Others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings"
    • Main idea: In some nations, especially developing countries, human beings are still suffering from poverty, famine, epidemics and natural disasters.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Dùng từ "Being" như danh từ thế nào cho chuẩn?
      • Supporting idea:  If the limited government budget is allocated to animal conservation, many people will face huge difficulty making a living >>  Protecting basic human rights should be the top priority of these countries.
      • Example: In many developing nations, such as parts of sub-Saharan Africa, the human population faces severe challenges like poverty, famine, epidemics, and natural disasters, with citizens struggling to secure basic necessities amidst prolonged droughts and food shortages. If a government allocates a significant portion of its budget to animal conservation efforts at the expense of addressing pressing human needs, local communities may face devastating consequences, intensifying difficulties in making a living and sparking ethical debates about prioritizing wildlife over the immediate well-being of its people.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm 1 "Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out" (nhấn mạnh ủng hộ quan điểm này)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"protect"tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: Conserving endangered species is essential, as they are part of our ecological chain. 
      • Supporting idea: The removal of a single species can set off a chain reaction affecting many others
      • Example: The reintroduction of gray wolves to Yellowstone National Park in the 1990s, following their extirpation in the early 20th century, had a profound impact on the ecosystem. By preying on elk and reducing their population, the wolves facilitated the regeneration of vegetation, triggering a positive ecological shift that, in turn, created new habitats and welcomed the return of species like beavers to the park.
    • Main idea 2: Another benefit of conserving endangered animals is their contribution to the field of medicine.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "conserve" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: Each living thing contains a unique reservoir of genetic material that cannot be retrieved or duplicated if lost. 
      • Example: A study by researchers at the University of California, Berkeley, revealed the crucial role of conserving endangered animals for medicinal purposes, exemplified by the Gila monster's venom containing unique peptides with significant potential in treating type 2 diabetes and showcasing the importance of preserving genetic reservoirs for future medical advancements.
         

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