Phân tích "Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others say that there are more important environmental problems
    • Main idea: The rise in recent catastrophic natural disasters has been strongly linked to climate change. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many scientists have made the case that incremental rises in temperature, specifically involving the oceans, has increased the frequency and potency of hurricanes, tsunamis, and blizzards >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh
        • This will lead to a number of problems, including flooding, extreme weather and drought, but also the extinction of species.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: The loss of some plants and animals certainly break the food chain and cause problems.
      • Supporting idea: We are part of a natural food chain, so the loss of animals, such as fish, means we will have less food in the future. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Diễn đạt"yếu tố tương lai"tiếng anh (Paraphrase"in the future")
      • Example: For example, when predatory animals like lions and tigers at the top of the pyramid disappear, it will lead to an uncontrollable increase in the number of herbivore  will hurt farm yield as animals like deer, rabbits and pigs will become vermin and eat up farm produce.
    • Main idea 2: The loss of any species is permanent and means that future generations will not be able to appreciate the wonders of a diverse natural world. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, the tragic extinction of the dodo is something which we still lament even today. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "extinction"

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