Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE (VIẾT VỀ social problems)
- Main idea: migrants who do not speak or understand the native language fail to understand the local custom and culture, which leads to social problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "local"
- Supporting idea:
- They hardly talk to local people and have little idea about the cultural diversity of the country. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a foreigner’s inability to communicate and their incomprehension is usually the main contributor to their reticence and reluctance to interact with local people)
- As a result, they even fail to realise the rules and regulations and how people feel in certain circumstances.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm main idea khác:
- Main idea: when people are faced with difficulty integrating into a different culture, they have a tendency to find and stick to their own ethnic groups. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "find" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: This will not only further prevent them from blending in but it may also be mistakenly considered a sign of deliberate separation from local people.
- Main idea: migrants who do not speak or understand the native language fail to understand the local custom and culture, which leads to social problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "local"
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE (VIẾT VỀ practical problems)
- Main idea: The inability to speak the local language may negatively affect one’s everyday activities in a foreign country.
- Supporting idea:
- Not being able to speak the native language can affect their ability to socialize properly or to perform everyday activities, such as giving and taking instructions at work or going shopping. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của từ "perform"
- As a result of this hampered communication, they can feel quite stressed or isolated.
- Example:
- If they struggle with the common language, they may be unable to freely express their ideas, which will hinder their ability to progress in the organization despite their talents.
- Having trouble establishing good relationships at work can also affect the probability of a promotion, regardless of how hard they work.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: The inability to speak the local language may negatively affect one’s everyday activities in a foreign country.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE (VIẾT VỀ social problems)
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