Phân tích"It is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for an art project for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculpture seen in public places. Some people think that it is wrong, and the government should spend money on other important things of public interests. Discuss both views & give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 07/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"It is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for an art project for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculpture seen in public places. Some people think that it is wrong, and the government should spend money on other important things of public interests. Discuss both views & give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 07/5/2023)

It is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for an art project for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculpture seen in public places. Some people think that it is wrong, and the government should spend money on other important things of public interests. Discuss both views & give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm It is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for an art project for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculpture seen in public places.
    • Main idea 1: Art is an essential part of a community's culture and heritage, and the government has a duty to preserve and promote it. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE "THE GOVERNMENT" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: The government's investment in art projects can help preserve the community's history and tradition and provide a sense of identity and pride for its citizens. 
      • Example: For example, the Egyptian government has invested in the restoration of ancient temples and monuments, such as the Great Pyramids of Giza, which not only preserves the country's history but also promotes tourism and boosts the economy.
    • Main idea 2: Investing in the arts can have long-term economic benefits, such as attracting tourism and fostering a creative industry. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"industry"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It can attract tourists who are interested in experiencing local cultural activities and events, leading to increased spending on accommodation, food, and other tourism-related expenses.  
        • Promoting the arts can lead to the development of a creative industry, creating jobs and boosting the economy.
      • Example: 
        • The Hoi An Lantern Festival in Vietnam is an example of how investing in the arts can lead to economic benefits
        • It has become a popular tourist attraction that contributes to the growth of the local economy by promoting and preserving the country's cultural heritage through traditional Vietnamese music, dance, and handcrafted lanterns.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that it is wrong, and the government should spend money on other important things of public interests.  & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Governments should prioritize spending on more practical and urgent matters such as healthcare, education, and infrastructure.
      • Supporting idea: Art projects are often expensive and don't have a direct impact on the lives of the public. >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ
      • Example: An example to illustrate this point could be a large-scale public sculpture commissioned by the government that cost millions of dollars to create, but does not provide any practical benefit to the community, such as improved infrastructure or public services.
    • Main idea 2: Governments have a responsibility to allocate funds in a responsible and efficient manner.
      • Supporting idea: Governments have a duty to ensure that taxpayer money is spent wisely, and that funds are allocated to areas that will have the greatest impact on the public's well-being. 
      • Example: For example, investing in healthcare, education, and infrastructure can lead to tangible improvements in people's lives, such as better access to healthcare services, improved quality of education, and more efficient transportation systems. 

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