Phân tích "Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world.
    • Main idea:  if we exchange data, we can make faster progress in scientific research and teaching
      • Supporting idea: The basic rationale for this notion is that when more individuals have access to information, research or commercial solutions will improve owing to frequent feedback
      • Example: Academic progress is underpinned by the ability to peer-review new research and theories, and similarly, in scientific research, collaboration between different scientists is often essential in making new breakthroughs. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "between" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: To remain ahead of the competition and avoid patent issues, firms keep information about corporate finances and the algorithm confidential. 
      • Supporting idea: Sharing this knowledge might cost the organization a lot of money and take away its competitive advantage. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
      • Example: It would be absurd for companies to share their financial accounts openly as this would make it easy for their rivals to compete unfairly.
    • Main idea 2: It is important to understand that sometimes new findings are often made at considerable expense in terms of time and money.
      • Supporting idea: There would be less incentive to develop intellectual property like new technologies and new drugs if they were instantly shared for everyone to duplicate.
      • Example: 

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