Phân tích "International travel influences individuals as well as the countries they visit. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "International travel influences individuals as well as the countries they visit. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

International travel influences individuals as well as the countries they visit. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages 
      • Main idea: Mass tourism can strain natural resources, contribute to pollution, and disrupt ecosystems. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & word form từ "disrupt" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: Popular tourist destinations often face challenges related to overtourism, leading to overcrowding, environmental degradation, and strain on local infrastructure.
      • Example: The large number of tourists in Venice contributes to environmental degradation. The constant flow of cruise ships, water taxis, and other vessels can cause erosion of the city's foundations and damage delicate ecosystems. 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages 
      • Main idea: In some cases, tourism can lead to the commodification of local cultures, traditions, and attractions. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: lead to sth
      • Supporting idea: This can result in the commercialization and distortion of cultural practices, eroding their authenticity and diluting their significance.
      • Example: Hoi An's popularity as a tourist destination has led to the mass production of souvenirs and handicrafts, including lanterns, traditional clothing, and artwork. While these items are often sold as representations of local culture, the sheer volume produced and the emphasis on catering to tourist preferences can dilute their authenticity and turn them into standardized products.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: International travel exposes individuals to diverse cultures, traditions, and perspectives. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"diverse"tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: It fosters empathy, tolerance, and appreciation for different ways of life, promoting cultural exchange and understanding among people from different backgrounds.
        • Example: In Seoul, visitors have the opportunity to explore historic sites such as Gyeongbokgung Palace, Changdeokgung Palace, and Jogyesa Temple. These landmarks showcase traditional Korean architecture, art, and religious practices, providing insights into the rich cultural heritage of the country.
      • Main idea 2: Tourism plays a significant role in the economies of many countries. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • International travelers contribute to local economies through spending on accommodations, dining, transportation, and attractions. 
          • This revenue supports job creation, infrastructure development, and the preservation of cultural heritage. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "development" tiếng anh 
        • Example: Thailand is a popular tourist destination known for its stunning beaches, rich cultural heritage, and vibrant cities. The tourism industry in Thailand contributes significantly to the country's economy. 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Mass tourism can strain natural resources, contribute to pollution, and disrupt ecosystems. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth 
        • Supporting idea: Popular tourist destinations often face challenges related to overtourism, leading to overcrowding, environmental degradation, and strain on local infrastructure.
        • Example: The large number of tourists in Venice contributes to environmental degradation. The constant flow of cruise ships, water taxis, and other vessels can cause erosion of the city's foundations and damage delicate ecosystems. 
      • Main idea 2: In some cases, tourism can lead to the commodification of local cultures, traditions, and attractions. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"attraction"tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: This can result in the commercialization and distortion of cultural practices, eroding their authenticity and diluting their significance.
        • Example: Hoi An's popularity as a tourist destination has led to the mass production of souvenirs and handicrafts, including lanterns, traditional clothing, and artwork. While these items are often sold as representations of local culture, the sheer volume produced and the emphasis on catering to tourist preferences can dilute their authenticity and turn them into standardized products.

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