Phân tích "In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What problems does this cause? 
    • Main idea 1: Some young people live very busy lives (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The major reason for the limited friendly relationships between neighbors is the absence of interaction)
      • Supporting idea:
        • Due to the radical changes in lifestyle over the years, people no longer need to interact with their neighbors like before, which means cultivating friendly relationships requires more effort
        • The rate of interaction in the past allowed the community to develop with minimal effort, and neighbors were friendly because they constantly interacted.
        • They want to take the garbage out or pick up the newspaper without turning it into a half hour ordeal. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: pick up
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Born in the digital age, young people are thought to be disconnected from their local area because they are addicted to social networking sites.
      • Supporting idea: With much of our lives having moved online, there is a perception that people have become detached from their local community.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 What can be done about this?
    • Main idea 1: People could plan a ceremony to celebrate these special events together.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, they could gather in one’s home or if the building has a garden they could meet each other there. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: families who have children could let them play with each other and strike a friendship instead of allowing children to sit in front of their computers all day long.
      • Supporting idea: In this way, the child’s parents meet and get to know others’ parents as well.
      • Example: 

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